Sunday, May 3, 2015

100 Word Challenge Week 31 - The Pretty Turkey

Once upon a time there was a turkey that just hatched four of her own, favoring only one named Finnegan.  He was the most adorable creature to ever live. The turkey ignored her other children, lavishing only Finnegan with her love and devotion. Finnegan was as beautiful on the outside as he was ugly on the inside. He teased and taunted his siblings and always demanded attention. But one stormy and dark night his siblings sought revenge and convinced the old town witch to help them with their plan.  Finnegan’s beauty would fade and would now match the ugliness within.  
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  1. BrendanMay 3, 2015 at 9:25 AM

    I red it with a British accent.It was the best

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    1. BrendanMay 23, 2015 at 9:36 AM

      I read it with a British accent. It was the best.

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  2. AnonymousMay 11, 2015 at 2:49 PM

    Heidi (Team 100WC New Zealand)
    Hello Jerrad. Well done, I really enjoyed your 100WC. Your descriptive words are very strong. You have included some great words like 'lavishing' and 'taunted' and your attention to punctuation really helps your writing to flow clearly. Keep up the excellent writing Jerrad!

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