A week before
Halloween on a Saturday afternoon I realized I still needed a costume. On my
way to the store I saw a green cat. I went in and saw nothing I liked so I walked
out and got chased by the same green cat into the next store. After an exhausting search I found a lame
clown costume. After I bought it, I was
all bummed out. My father looked me in
the eyes.
“You want that
ostrich costume instead, don’t you?”
“Yup that clown
costume was the last thing I wanted.”
My broken heart was lifted
from the swimming pool of
despair.
Great job, very funny, wonderful use of quotations, and amazing last sentence! So what were you actually for Halloween?
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I actually was a man riding an ostrich, it was awesome!
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Deletegreat job with puncuation. what were you actually for halloween.
ReplyDeleteI actually was a man riding an ostrich. It was awesome.
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DeleteThank you all for taking the time to read my blog and my stories.
DeleteThat is an amazing last sentence, I like the part where you say. "My broken heart was lifted from the pool of despair."
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