One day in Cardiff Bay there was a family
of tourists visiting from Canada. They
came upon a dock with three statues; a woman, a man and a dog.
Six hours later…
The statues came to life and the first
thing they did was sneak into the closed fair and ride the ferris wheel.
“I feel so alive!” Yelled the woman.
“Same here.” Exclaimed the man as the dog just barked.
Then night was over and the fair opened again.
“What are we going to do?” Whispered the
man.
“I don’t know!” Cried the woman.
“Lets try and sneak out.”
Jerrad, this is a fantastic story! The use of dialogue is superb, Your punctuation is in place, and the sequence of the story flows extremely well. Great job! Keep writing,
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Evergreen Park, Illinois, USA
You have created a very interesting story using good details and lively conversation. Well done!
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