The silence was deafening. Stoughton and Morris were
down to their last rocks in the final game of the world cup of curling. Morris,
his face as red as a fire truck, had one chance to steal the game away from
Stoughton. The rock felt heavier than he
remembered, his hands shaking. As the rock left his fingers he turned around
and slowly looked back to see his rock in the 4 foot, an inch away from the
button. It all came down to Stoughton. Cool as a cucumber, he cleaned the
debris off his rock. He gently slid down the ice and released his hand.
We like how you built the tension. We also liked your similes, well done! :) Class 10 Essex, UK
ReplyDeleteThankyou so much.
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